Rewrite: Is it sustainable that we continue on our current path of technological development?

I elected not to implement the green and blue feedback highlighted above; the green as the reflection does not relate directly to education but speaks to the topic in a broader sense, the blue as I felt these points were implicit based on the point highlighted in blue in my re-write (and found in the original version). I decided to add an additional reference to a journal paper on research regarding the relationship between social media use and sleep quality, anxiety and depression. The original version only contained a reference to a newspaper article detailing lawsuits made against Meta for these reasons; I feel that adding the research references adds a layer of legitimacy to the claim. Description In light of the rapid development of technology over the past 15 years, research has identified a number of areas in which the influence of this technology has proven to be detrimental. The question of sustainability seems an obvious one; with these negative trends identified in such a s...